I graded myself score 7.
I think my paragraphs through these two months are getting better and better; however, I always make the same mistake my key pal often reminds me, such as some grammar error, and coherence. Therefore, I think I cannot get the higher than eight score for I still make some errors. When it comes to my content, after I looked through others’ paragraph through these two weeks, I think there are still some demerits laid in my paragraph, like I always talked so many things but they completely not related to the topic. Look to the opposite, someone’s paragraphs will be brief but stick to the topic from the beginning to the end. As my point of view, I think the coherence is the most important of all the elements which a good paragraph need to equip with. So, I think the improvement which I will make for the remaining semester will be the coherence and the content. I will make a good coherence and the content, use the different words to describe the same things and try to make my paragraph rich in different aspects and not to be superficial.
And this is the opinion of my key pal
As to the grade, well, I will grade us 8.
I browsed some other students' blogs and found that they exchange mostly their ideas about the topic, not discuss the writing techniques. So my comments seem quite different from theirs.
By now, I think you have made great progress in writing skills.
So, for the rest tasks, I think I will share more opinions about the topic with you.
Task 8 is interseting, isn't it? it helps us look into what we have done for the past two months, right?
回覆刪除Well, I am glad that you think you benefit from my comments on your articles. You have indeed made great progress in your writing skills for the past two months. Now I can grabe the main idea in your writing easily. Also, I think you always have many opinions to share with others in your articles and I like that. I can see you make many efforts to compose each of your article and I do hope you can keep your enthusiasm for writing.